Dui Joner Kobita ...
Tomar du chok bollo koto kotha ...
Ek polokeii nile sob i kere ...
Jotoii duree jaoo na tumi akhun ...
Firbe pakhi, janii, eii Neer e ...
Tomar duchok bollo amay "Oree"...
Rong legeche amar buker majhe ...
Sei rong e te amar jibon Rongin ...
Rong legeche amar sondha sanjhe ...
Akash juree megh jomeche dekho ...
bolche amay bolche deke oraa ...
Tomar amar golpo sob e suru ...
Thak na tobe mithya golpo kora ...
Tomar amar swapno gulo akhon ...
bolche amay akash chuye dekho ...
onek din i "aami" "tumi" holo ...
ebaar na hoy "aamra" hote sekho ...
Well nice once again very nice choice of words & nice flow of imotion but for whom it is written that's not clear but overall very nice...
ReplyDeleteLiked it a lot........
Ur other person is really very lucky person I have tell....
Good job keep it up.....
tomar lekhar bhalo ekta essence ache.. pore bhalo lage.. bhashao besh jhor jhore... keep it up...
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